· Lord of the flies
· chapter:#4
· Perspective: Ralph
· Title: The great feast
Yes jack finally caught some meat good job jack. At first I thought that it was kind of nasty and weird to eat a raw pig but then I realized that I need this to stay alive. Boy it sure took him a log time to catch that pig, I think that every know and then I need to help jack kill a pig. Gosh its really buggin me to see piggy all alone but know that I look Back I realize that I have been a meanie head to him and the others so I an gonna try to be nicer to all especially piggy now that I know he is really sensitive and can get hurt easily. I WILL NOT BE SELFISH!!!!
1 comment:
I like how you really captured the mind of teen boy. You pretty much sized up the whole chapter in one paragraph. I'd like to see more.
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