Why hello there folks my name is Atticus, I am a lawyer, I also returned to the town of Maycomb so I can start my practice,Iam also a single father because my wife died, and I am the father of 2 children one daughter Scout and one son Jem who tey both run a muck every single day. Boy I'll tell ya I remember the day they both came up to me both hot headed over one question and it turned out that they had nothing to be fighting about because they were both right. Boy Id say that the best memory that I have is when scout started school but it was also the worst moment for jem because they would both be attending the same school and jem would have to babysit all the time but other than that I was happy because she was so smart I couldnt wait for her to become a really smart girl to a reaally smart woman. But the only thing that really makes me mad is that I dont think she had a good time at school because she had a very mean teacher. But after school around in the winter through spring the kids found a lot of food in bags around the house because what happened is we were getting paid with food by the Cunninghams. And I remember when scout asked me if we were poor but I told her not as poor as the cunninghams because you see the reason why they pay us in food is because there farmers and since the big crash hit them hard, they have no money.
2 comments:
Luis,
I think you did a good job. I think you really explained what happened in the chapters. You didn't leave out anything. I think you should have made your long paragraph into more paragraphs. I think it's too long as one big paragraph. Besides that, good job.
You wrote with a lot of detail, which is good. You might want to proofread after you're done for spelling errors and stuff like that.
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